bbb - impartial eyes needed

[sailorstkwrning]

I am working on something that would not exist without the help of my usual hand-holders (arsenicjade and egelantier) and I'm feeling like I need a neutral third party to skim the first 20 pages (!) or so and tell me it is not dreadful.

it's over 20K historical AU, PATD/TYV + MCR + more, h/c w offscreen imprisonment and abuse.

anyone?

Comments

[corbae.livejournal.com]

I would love to help! I think that may disqualify me as a neutral third party, though.

[sailorstkwrning.livejournal.com]

noooo it doesn't, it will srsly help in this instance because sweet jesus this fic is, well, complicated. email?

[corbae.livejournal.com]

r.st.vier AT gmail.com

I can definitely give feedback by next weekend, but let me know if you need it sooner!

[sailorstkwrning.livejournal.com]

mail sent! thank you!!